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Worksheet 2: IP Thesis and Evidence Worksheet

There are two ways to organize the IP: A: by Theory (UDHR). B: by Case (movie)

I will organize my essay by ( )

Note:
· You only need to choose one way to write your essay, and only need to fill out the information below for the one you choose (not both).
· Please think through about your choice as you need to use the same organization for completing the essay, including more upcoming worksheets and all drafts.

If you choose to organize by Theory, finish the task on the left as below: If you choose to organize by Case, finish the task on the right as below:

A

By Theory (UDHR)

B

By Case (Movie)

Thesis

Statement

Formula:
The UDHR is an effective tool for analyzing
the
(thesis key word)
revealed in (the name of the movie that you watched)
through the following articles: (article #), (article #), and (article #)

For example:
The UDHR is a valuable tool for explaining the
(injustice against immigrants)
revealed in the movie “The Visitor” through the following articles: article 3, article 6, and article 12.

Write your thesis here:

Thesis

Statement

Formula:
The
(thesis key word)
revealed in (the name of the movie that you watched)
can be analyzed by looking at UDHR
through the following characters/events:
(character 1), (character 2), and (character 3).

OR
(event 1), (event 2), and (event 3).

For example:
The (injustice against immigrants) revealed in the movie “The Visitor” can be analyzed by looking at UDHR through the following characters: the vulnerability of Tarek, the restriction of visiting son for Mouna, and residential instability for Zainab.

Write your thesis here:

Evidence for BODY PARAGRAPH #1

Evidence for BODY PARAGRAPH #1

Evidence #1

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

As UDHR states in Article #, “article” (citation)

For example:
As UDHR states in Article 13, “Everyone has the right to freedom of movement and residence within the borders of each state” (United Nations, 1948).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #1

from the case (movie)

In the film, (context), “quote” (citation).

For example:
In the film, Tarek is arrested in the subway station when the police believe he has jumped the turnstile. However, Tarek clearly holds the ticket in his hand, stating “I did not jump it! I paid. I paid!” (London & McCarthy, 2007).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #2

from the case (movie)

In the film, (context), “quote” (Citation).

For example:
In the film, Tarek is arrested in the subway station when the police believe he has jumped the turnstile. However, Tarek clearly holds the ticket in his hand, stating “I did not jump it! I paid. I paid!” (London & McCarthy, 2007).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #2

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

As UDHR states in Article #, “article” (citation).

For example:
As the human rights document states in Article 13, “Everyone has the right to freedom of movement and residence within the borders of each state” (United Nations, 1948).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence for BODY PARAGRAPH #2

Evidence for BODY PARAGRAPH #2

Evidence #1

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

As UDHR states in Article #, “article” (citation).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #1

from the case (movie)

In the film, (context), “quote” (citation).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #2

from the case
(movie)

In the film, (context), “quote” (Citation).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #2

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

As UDHR states in Article #, “article” (citation)

Write your evidence here:

Evidence for BODY PARAGRAPH #3

Evidence for BODY PARAGRAPH #3

Evidence #1

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

As UDHR states in Article #, “article” (citation).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #1

from the case (movie)

In the film, (context), “quote” (citation).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #2

from the case
(movie)

In the film, (context), “quote” (Citation).

Write your evidence here:

Evidence #2

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

As UDHR states in Article #, “article” (citation)

Write your evidence here:

Worksheet 3-Body Paragraph

Fill out the information for the organization you have chosen in previous Worksheets: Organize by Theory, OR by Case (not both).
Please note: Copying sentences from the example used in the class would be considered plagiarism. Please avoid this issue in your essay.

Thesis Statement (Organize by Theory)

Follow this formula:
The UDHR is an effective tool for analyzing the
(thesis key word)
revealed in the movie “name of the movie” through the following: articles: article #, article#, and article #.
For example:
The UDHR is a valuable tool for explaining the
(injustice against immigrants)
revealed in the movie “Visitor” through the following articles: article 9, article 18, article 20
Write your thesis statement here:

Body Paragraph 1

Body Paragraph 2

Body Paragraph 3

Assertion:

This should be only one simple sentence.
State what the paragraph will discuss/prove
Include accurate thesis, paragraph key word (from theory), and topic key word (from case).

Write your assertion here:

Assertion:

Write your assertion here:

Assertion:

Write your assertion here:

Explanation:

Explain the assertion in more detail, focusing on the relationship between paragraph key word and the thesis key word. Don’t forget to begin the sentence with a transition word/phrase as suggested in the course pack. This should be only one sentence.

Write your explanation sentence here:

Explanation:

Write your explanation sentence here:

Explanation:

Write your explanation sentence here:

Evidence #1

from the theory (an article from UDHR)

Write your evidence #1 here:

Evidence #1

Write your evidence #1 here:

Evidence #1

Write your evidence #1 here:

Discussion #1

With this theory/ clearly (explain how the evidence #1 connects with the thesis briefly)

Write your discussion #1 here:

Discussion #1

Write your discussion #1 here:

Discussion #1

Write your discussion #1 here:

Evidence #2

Begin with a transition (one sentence): This concept sheds light on/ This notion explains why/This theory justifies ……
+
Introduce the evidence:
In the movie, (clear and meaningful context), “quote from movie” (citation).

Write your Evidence #2 here:

Evidence #2

Write your Evidence #2 here:

Evidence #2

Write your Evidence #2 here:

Discussion #2 (integrated discussion)

Explain how the theory explain the problem or issue in the case.
Give details and draw out the key words from both theory and case.
Each sentence should clearly combine language from the theory or case.
(the order does not matter, some sentences can begin explaining the theory and move to case, some can begin with case and then explain theory)

Write your discussion #2 here:

Discussion #2

Write your discussion #2 here:

Discussion #2

Write your discussion #2 here:

Connection

Summarize in one sentence how the paragraph proved the assertion/thesis
Make sure to include accurate thesis and paragraph key words (article) and topic key word (case).

Write your connection sentence here:

Connection

Write your connection sentence here:

Connection

Write your connection sentence here:

Thesis Statement (Organize by Case)

Follow this formula!
The
(thesis key word)
revealed in the movie (name of the movie) can be analyzed by looking at UDHR through the following characters/events: (character 1), (character 2), and (character 3). OR (event 1), (event 2), and (event 3).

For example:
The (injustice against immigrants) revealed in the movie “The Visitor” can be analyzed by looking at UDHR through the following characters: the vulnerability of Tarek, the restriction of visiting son for Mouna, and residential instability for Zainab.

Write your thesis statement here:

Body Paragraph 1

Body Paragraph 2

Body Paragraph 3

Assertion:

This should be only one simple sentence.
State what the paragraph will discuss/prove
Include accurate thesis, paragraph key word (from case), and topic key word (from theory).

Write your assertion here:

Assertion:

Write your assertion here:

Assertion:

Write your assertion here:

Explanation:

Explain the assertion in more detail, focusing on the relationship between paragraph key word and the thesis key word. Don’t forget to begin the sentence with a transition word/phrase as suggested in the course pack. This should be only one sentence.

Write your explanation sentence here:

Explanation:

Write your explanation sentence here:

Explanation:

Write your explanation sentence here:

Evidence #1

From the case (movie)
In the movie, (clear and meaningful context), “quote from movie” (citation).

Write your evidence #1 here:

Evidence #1

Write your evidence #1 here:

Evidence #1

Write your evidence #1 here:

Discussion #1

Explain how the evidence connects with the thesis briefly.

Write your discussion #1 here:

Discussion #1

Write your discussion #1 here:

Discussion #1

Write your discussion #1 here:

Evidence #2

From the theory (UDHR)
Begin with a transition(one sentence): (theory) explains this situation with the idea of; This aspect of the case explains why (theory) …
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Introduce the evidence:
According to article #, “article” (citation).

Write your evidence #2 here:

Evidence #2

Write your evidence #2 here:

Evidence #2

Write your evidence #2 here:

Discussion #2 (Integrated discussion)

Explain how the theory explain the problem or issue in the case.
Give details and draw out the key words from both theory and case.
Each sentence should clearly combine language from the theory or case.
(the order does not matter, some sentences can begin explaining the theory and move to case, some can begin with case and then explain theory)

Write your discussion #2 here:

Discussion #2

Write your discussion #2 here:

Discussion #2

Write your discussion #2 here:

Connection

Summarize in one sentence how the paragraph proved the assertion/thesis
Make sure to include accurate thesis and paragraph key words (character/event) and topic key word (article).

Write your connection sentence here:

Connection

Write your connection sentence here:

Connection

Write your connection sentence here: