Need a Rewrite for extra credit introduction to fiction to post

Respond to one or two of your classmates’ discussion questions, which they asked in their video presentations in Unit 4. You will earn 5 points for each response (up to 10 total extra credit points).

Rewrite 1
The first difference I noticed is that in the book, before the twister, we only meet Dorothy and her aunt, uncle, and Toto. There is no mean neighbor or three farm workers.
The second difference I noticed is that there is no fortune teller in the book that Dorothy goes to, that was completely made up for the movie.
The third thing that is noticed that was different was that once Dorothy lands in Oz, she meets Glinda the good witch of the north who wears a pink dress, but in the book, she meets the White witch of the north. In the book, Glinda is the Witch of the south.
The fourth thing I noticed is that in the movie, once Dorothy lands the house on the witch and Glinda puts the shoes on her, she does not take them off. In the book, she takes them off and puts them in her house. Its not until she decides to go on a long journey and she realizes she will need better walking shoes does she put them on.
The fifth thing that I noticed that was different is that in the movie, Dorothy leaves on the yellow brick road almost immediately, in the book, she stays in her house and sleeps, packs food and water, and then leaves on her journey.
The sixth difference is that when we meet the scarecrow in the book, we find out the story of how he was made. He apparently had only been alive for a day when Dorothy meets him, whereas in the movie he only says that he has been there for as long as he can remember.
The seventh difference I noticed is that in the book, all of the munchkins in munchkin land wear blue. In the movie, they are all wearing bright different colors.
The eighth difference I noticed is that in the book the color you wear can say what your status is. For example, the munchkins in munchkin land think that Dorothy is a witch because her dress is white and blue, and only sorcerers can wear white. they also think she is wearing blue to show she is a friend to the munchkins.
The ninth difference I noticed is that in the book we also get the Tin Woodsman’s story, he apparently was in love, and the girls mother went to the wicked witch and asked her to stop them from being together.  He wants a heart to be happy again.
The tenth difference I noticed is that the reason in the book that they are able to get out of the poppy field is because they have their field mice friends carry them, in the movie, Glinda has it magically snow to get them out. 

Rewrite 2
I am answering this based off of the announcement. 
A few differences I noticed right away was that in the film the shoes are ruby red, while in the novel they are silver! Another difference is that in the film Dorothy is depicted as a young adult/teenage while in the book it states she is a child and that she is the same height as the munchkins, not taller. Another difference is when Dorothy sets out on the yellow brick road, she comes across a character named Boq who she enjoys a meal and conversation with, which is completely omitted from the film. This is an important scene in the novel as he gives her good information about what lies ahead on her journey. One last difference I noticed is that at the beginning of chapter 2, when Dorothy comes out of her home she is not introduced to every single munchkin type like she is in the movie.  In the movie they come up to her as the lullaby league, the lollipop guild, the coroner, the mayor etc… but in the novel she simply speaks with the witch of the east (Glinda) who sends her on her journey to get back to Kansas. 
A great read so far!

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