degree : Professional context in developing practice

DescriptionI have recently submitted cours

e work 1000 word piece which failed due to lack of critical analysis and poor academic writing.

I have added 1000 piece with comments from tutor to show where I have gone wrong. Which by the sounds of it everywhere!!

The fundemental part was developing a area of improvement within clinical practice which I covered surgical pathway for a certain procedure. But I have not fully discussed or analysised critcally diversity within the clinical workplace. Analyse how information and contmepory health communication can enhance & improve health care. And essentially critically reflect on the healthcare environment in the context of developing practice by considering strategic, cultural and organisational challenges. This needs to be reflective of current day nursing practice within NHS UK and need writer who is experienced and has sound background knowledge within NHS nursing today.

Below essay is the 5 key elements which I need to cover to gain pass.

Paper should be Varanda style 11 with 1.5 space.

REFERENCES NEED TO BE CURRENT

HARVARD STYLE – NURSING DEGREE

I know I have been descriptive with 1000 piece and it clearly lacks critical analysis and discussion to back up my points.

Please I need help, this has been a very difficult piece to complete. Time, working full time and pressures with Covid have impacted on my study time and resulted in me submitting work which is not up to standard.