Research paper, (Qualitative research method) Communication class

I’m looking for someone able to do my final paper (12 pages) in Qualitative research class.
I already did a rough draft of 4 pages but it was not good, so I got some feedback from my professor that I will give you.
My subject for this paper is “How the intimate relationships can affect the well-being of student-athletes?”
Here’s some guidelines:
The paper has to be framed as narrative or as an ethnography research ((please write as a narrative, not as an outline): 
I. Introduction: Introduce your topic by describing the problem or issue – give background of the problem or issue, provide rationale for why the reader should care/ why the problem is in need of study. this section should:
•Point to deficiencies in the literature
•Signal an attempt to give voice to under-represented groups
•Signal a desire to probe understanding of central phenomenon

II. A   Review: depth view of some of the relevant literature that addresses your topic or issue. This section should conclude with preliminary research questions or hypotheses for this assignment.

III. Proposed method: how do you intend to study the problem, topic, or issue?

10 – 12 page proposal ready to be submitted to the Institutional Review Board for approval.

I uploaded what I already did during my rough draft (word) and my professor’s feedback (pdf).