Social Science Question – 20210618W

Please read and check the following paper that contains the topic that I choose and the research questions and the literature review before you start the paper. And also follow the rubric above pls. Pls, do this paper based on the staff that I provided. I will pay you extra if I got 7/7. Thank you so much! I upload the pdf , and the reply from my professor as a picture in this link, the reply from my professor in the pdf is not enough, the picture one is the correct and enough one: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1BOv16tG9Yr… Q: The purpose of this assignment is: (1) to identify and enumerate shortcomings in the previously submitted sections of your research paper; and (2) to propose revisions to address in the final research paper. This assignment will mimic the revise and resubmit process common in peer-reviewed publication outlets. Guidelines are as follows: 1. Include four sections in your revise and resubmit statement, one pertaining to each of the four sections of the research paper that you have already submitted and received feedback on (1) the introduction; (2) the lit review; (3) the data section; and (4) the variables section. 2. In each section, number and list the revisions that you plan to make. You should first indicate the critique that you received from the instructor that you are responding to. Then, indicate your plan for revision. If you are proposing revisions based on self-identification of additional weaknesses, please indicate as such. 3. Please be as specific as possible about your revision strategy. 4. Write formally as if you are submitting the revised and resubmit statement to an academic journal along with your revised paper. Example: A research study is focused on the opioid use epidemic in the United States (research topic) and whether parental use of prescription drugs encourages opioid use by their children (research question). Using this example, your revise and resubmit statement could be formatted as follows: Introduction 1. The instructor critiqued the organization of my introduction. Specifically, he suggested that I start broadly with the research topic before identifying and justifying my research question. In response, I plan to provide an overview of opioid use in the U.S., including the extent of use and trends. I will then identify my research question and discuss why knowledge about the transmission of prescription drug use by parents to opioid use by their children can inform policy. 2. The instructor… In response… Research Statement 1. The instructor noted that my research statement discussed one study at a time in back-to-back paragraphs and recommended that I summarize the literature as a whole. Accordingly, I have accessed more research in order to better understand the literature as a whole. The literature largely supports my research question, with some exceptions. In the revised paper, I will discuss the studies that support my research question and then note the exceptions in a different paragraph. 2. Based on my own reading of the lit review… In response… The instructor… In response… The instructor noted that my research statement discussed one study at a time in back-to-back paragraphs and recommended that I summarize the literature as a whole. Accordingly, I have accessed more research in order to better understand the literature as a whole. The literature largely supports my research question, with some exceptions. In the revised paper, I will discuss the studies that support my research question and then note the exceptions in a different paragraph. etc.